alienatedcannibal's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Joyous]

Are you sure....

That this is your first animation? Seems to me, either you did your homework and actually looked into making a flash before even opening the program, or you've done this before. Either way, this was pretty good. Water effect was a little messed up tho, just didn't look quite right.

prichard0116 responds:

Ya, I had some good instruction on Flash basics before I got started (did a couple quick tutorials and such). As for the water, nature is damn hard to mimic! Thanks for the feedback.

[Cock Game]

Sadly....

I know this toon is gonna pass so I won't get any blam/protection points. This is ridiculous man, I've been seeing this same group of people making junk for a few days now. There is NO WAY it took this many people to make this. What it seems to me is possible the uploader (TheRuining) thinks that if it seems that there are multiple people working on a project that viewers are more inclined to vote high... I don't know but this is horrible. The animation needs work. I would comment on everything else but there isn't anything except for that stupid song which is irritating after a while...

[Ninja Death Battle]

A little help for one to another....

try making a stop command at the end. on the last frame make it a keyframe and type in the action

stop();

Also, a replay button. make a symbol (button) and on the same frame as the stop command click on the button and type the action

on (release){
gotoAndPlay ("main");
}

where "main" is the instance name of the first frame of your animation. To name it just click the first frame of animation and go into the properties and name it whatever you want. Just make sure whatever you name it is the same name you use for your replay command. That should get rid of that annoying looping problem you seem to be facing.

Normally, I give sticks an insta-blam but this one, like few others, got a little more. I gave you a 2/5 and a 5/10 just because I can tell you worked on this and it's not that bad (even tho I really do HATE sticks).... Keep up the good work and try to make a background and preloader.... What flash program are you using that sucks so bad that you can't use sound? Time to upgrade much?

nonameavilable responds:

thanks for the tips im using pencil by the way and i can use sound its just it has to be in wav form and i even uploaded a sound converter but for some reason it still glitches

[LL- School]

At least...

It was better that the other LL stuff I've seen.

[Blue Stickman Animation]

"This is the greatest animation of all life."

You are mistaken.

[TopStick]

Sticks...

Now I've been saying for a while how much I can't stand all the recent stick animations on NG (specifically stating that I must have missed a "how to copy xiao xiao" tutorial because everything looks just the same) however, I gotta give it to ya man. This is one stick animation that I'm definitely tagging in favorites!

Terkoiz1 responds:

At least I made you watch the whole thing right? Mission accomplished!

[Social Assassin]

Face Circles...

You captured the world man (everyone is on those sites way too much)! I wasn't a HUGE fan of ur art style (but it's your style so i'm not gonna bash it.... plus it was original) Sound quality was great.

Michael-T-Scott responds:

Hi and thanks so much for your feedback! Don't worry about the style; I truly don't have one. It's all experimental as far as looks go... It's the content, the writing and ideas that I'm most focused on. I'm glad you liked it overall. :)

[Billy Meets Bowser]

He's got the AIDS!!!

Animation 3.5/5
Lip Sync 5/5
Audio N/A
Bowser Snot Drip 100/5

kalabor106 responds:

I'm surprised you spotted the snot dripping. Thanks

[Nyan Steve 1955-2011]

This is BS....

I'm not bashing you but I'm just saying that I've seen so many loops that got terrible ratings (even have one of my own) but because this one is A)about steve jobs and B) has alot of big name players as authors, it got front page. Amazing...

[My Dr. Who Fan Fiction]

Dr..... WHO?

I have no idea who Dr. Who is so my opinion on this is completely unbiased!

1. Fabio creeps me out!
2. I know you wanted to use the actual pics of the characters but your cropping job sucked. Very.... boxed.
3. I like the song (first time I heard it was on "Donnie Darko"
4. If you are gonna use real life elements then find a pic of a heart too (obviously not a real one). It shows consistency in the toon and makes it look more real.
5. "pirateplatypus" was just offering a suggestion. There was no need to snap back with the ALL CAPS comment. Besides, he wasn't telling you anything, he was posing a question.