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Are you sure....

That this is your first animation? Seems to me, either you did your homework and actually looked into making a flash before even opening the program, or you've done this before. Either way, this was pretty good. Water effect was a little messed up tho, just didn't look quite right.

prichard0116 responds:

Ya, I had some good instruction on Flash basics before I got started (did a couple quick tutorials and such). As for the water, nature is damn hard to mimic! Thanks for the feedback.

Sadly....

I know this toon is gonna pass so I won't get any blam/protection points. This is ridiculous man, I've been seeing this same group of people making junk for a few days now. There is NO WAY it took this many people to make this. What it seems to me is possible the uploader (TheRuining) thinks that if it seems that there are multiple people working on a project that viewers are more inclined to vote high... I don't know but this is horrible. The animation needs work. I would comment on everything else but there isn't anything except for that stupid song which is irritating after a while...

A little help for one to another....

try making a stop command at the end. on the last frame make it a keyframe and type in the action

stop();

Also, a replay button. make a symbol (button) and on the same frame as the stop command click on the button and type the action

on (release){
gotoAndPlay ("main");
}

where "main" is the instance name of the first frame of your animation. To name it just click the first frame of animation and go into the properties and name it whatever you want. Just make sure whatever you name it is the same name you use for your replay command. That should get rid of that annoying looping problem you seem to be facing.

Normally, I give sticks an insta-blam but this one, like few others, got a little more. I gave you a 2/5 and a 5/10 just because I can tell you worked on this and it's not that bad (even tho I really do HATE sticks).... Keep up the good work and try to make a background and preloader.... What flash program are you using that sucks so bad that you can't use sound? Time to upgrade much?

nonameavilable responds:

thanks for the tips im using pencil by the way and i can use sound its just it has to be in wav form and i even uploaded a sound converter but for some reason it still glitches

Recent Game Reviews

13 Game Reviews

Well...

The animation was great, but it just felt like a weak game to me.... I've scanned some of the other review and I'm pretty alone in this but, hey, that's life I guess. Maybe make all the CC knights selectable. Other than that, IDK.

Problem....

It looked good and all but.... no title screen? options menu? control screen? storyline? We (the viewers/gamers) get nothing?

lol1365 responds:

it is my first game and the door is just i forgot to delete it

Hmmm....

Didn't do anything. Loaded images and program 100% but sound did nothing and never went past that screen.

I am an aspiring animator/game designer. Truth be told, I'm not that good yet, but I feel that I'm getting better with every new thing I learn. I guess that's kind of the point. Oh, and "Elevator Pilot" really is my occupation, that's not even a joke :)

Beaumont Livingston III @alienatedcannibal

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