alienatedcannibal's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Delivery Boy can fly!]

Come on bro...

Animation meant to look rough cause he's a delivery guy? That is such a cop-out answer. You just didn't want to try that hard. This is one of your two submissions (Both still under judgement as of right now). Seems to me that you just wanted to have a cartoon on newgrounds so bad that you threw anything you could make up instead of attempting to make your first submission a good one. I'm not saying it has to be a masterpiece, just put some effort into it. Myself - I have no submissions at the moment. I am currently working on a video for a song I really enjoy but I refuse to post it until I am completely happy with every aspect of it. I think you should do the same :)

EpicDoopliss responds:

Ummm... the animation is rough becuase he lives in a colorless world. .-.

[Cursor Button Whatever]

It didn't make much sense

But it was pretty cool... I don't know what's up with the doors tho. The only thing I didn't like was at the very end (right before the char bios) you used hand drawn squiggles for explosion effect. Everything else in the toon is very smooth (using the circle and square tools) and that is sloppy. I just doesn't look right, but hey... that's just my opinion :)

BoredLooney responds:

I kinda already knew it was sloppy, but i'm glad you liked it!

[A Walk In Andante]

Sprites.... Hmmmm....

Overall, it was pretty cool. The only issues I found were a couple of spots should have had sound FX (When they land on the subway cart). Try not to zoom in too close to them. I know you were going for dramatic but getting that pixelated just hurts the eyes and you can't tell what you're looking at. I would have liked to see it longer tho.

Was that Mario Land they ended up in before the subway cart?

PSILeo responds:

Yes, I wanted to add something else other then that Mario Land background, something more rocky. But, flash was being a jerk. :/

[Goblin Invasion]

It... Just... Won't.... STOP!!!

I like you're art style, and the weird bandit that kept moving all around the screen... Did u do all the voices yourself? That's something I'm terrible at, but I liked the differences.... Keep it up man. One thing tho: The music on the replay screen just never ends does it?

maxvm responds:

I voiced all the characters and used Audacity to create more of a vocal range. I tried my best to make them varied, but I also used loads of pitch adjustment.